Leman checklist for complete translation:

1. Accurate
2. Natural
3. Clear
4. Coherent
5. Cohesive
6. Smooth (information flow)
6. Information weighting (heavy phrases?)
8. Clear event line
9. What's the (main) point of the passage? Is it understood in the translation?
10. Prominence
11. Foregrounding
12. Backgrounding
13. Figurative language
14. Rhetorical impact
15. Uses of language (exaggeration, understatement, sarcasm, etc.)
16. Introduction of characters (topics)
17. Topic continuity
18. Thematic continuity (thread of logic)
19. Natural information chunking
20. Connections between sentences and clauses
21. Repetition OK or not OK?
22. Changes of speakers clear?
23. Quote beginnings and ends clear?
24. Familiar vocabulary
25. Ease of reading
26. Word order
27. Style
28. Implicit information (make explicit when necessary)
29. Omissions check
30. Extraneous information check
31. Community check (including naive speaker comprehension check)
32. Revision (revision, revision, revision,...)